I enjoy novels in verse. So, when I received both Salt by Helen Frost and The Weight of Water by Sarah Crossan, I
decided to read them one after the other to compare and contrast! Both are
novels in verse (obviously), both are written by women who are mostly known for
their YA work, and yet both are for the younger set.
Salt will perhaps
get more notice. It’s historical fiction and Helen Frost is probably the more
well-known author. But I didn’t like it as much. The story is told in
alternating poems by the two protagonists: Anikwa, 12, is a member of the Miami
tribe and James, also 12, is an American boy. We are on the verge of the War of
1812 in the Indiana Territory. Anikwa’s poems look like “patterns of Miami
ribbon work,” according to the author, while James poems are like stripes on a
flag. It’s a nice conceit and works well. Unfortunately, the conflict between
the characters (war is coming, whom can you trust?) is set up and resolved
rather quickly. And there are a lot of stereotypes. James’s family isn’t like
the others—they respect the Indians’ ways. And Anikwa’s family sees that and
trusts them. Meanwhile, Isaac – another boy at the fort – is a brat and
represents the ugly Americans. So, it’s a rather simplistic story. The best
poetry in the book comes from the poems about salt that separate different
parts of the book
The Weight of Water
also features a 12-year-old protagonist – Cassie, an immigrant from Poland now
living in England. It’s set in the current day. Cassie and her mother have come
to England to look for Cassie’s runaway dad. Cassie faces lots of bullying and
prejudice from other girls as a stranger in a strange land. But she’s wise enough
to almost respect the shunning she receives from the cool girls – saying she
might have done the same thing at her old school. There are many conflicts in
the book, including Cassie vs. her mother, who stubbornly makes them look each
day for the missing dad; Cassie vs. the cool girls at school; Cassie vs. the
school, which places her two grades below her level because she doesn’t speak
English well. Not all of these conflicts are totally resolved by the end of the
book, which is as it should be. But Cassie learns to stand up for herself and finds
friends who support her. As an added bonus, the poems are both lyrical and stay
true to Cassie and others’ voices (particularly her friend William’s when he’s
describing how sick he was)
My two all-time favorite novels in verse are Out of the Dust by Karen
Hesse, which everyone knows, All the Broken Pieces by Ann E. Burg, which everyone should know. The
Weight of Water and May B. by Caroline Starr Rose come close. For poignant
lessons combining poetry and grief, you can’t go wrong with Love That Dog by
Sharon Creech (and the sequel Hate That Cat, of course).
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